Tuesday, September 9, 2008
the hockey sweater
this is a story about a lil boys child hood.And Maurice Richard isnspierd this little boy's hockey team.They wore the same jersey as Maurice Richard the red, white, and blueuniform of the Montre aI Canadiens.and they were inspierd so much that the just all wanted to be like him like skate like the wind and slap shot like a flaming bullet.And they would prey to god and hope that they would be as good as Maurice Richard.
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(t)his is a story about a (lil) boy(')s childhood. (And) Maurice Richard (isnspierd) this little boy's hockey team. They wore the same jersey as Maurice Richard the red, white, and blue uniform of the (Montre aI) Canadiens. NEW SENTENCE They were (inspierd) so much that (the) just all wanted to be like him, skate like the wind and (SHOOT) like a flaming bullet. (And) NEW SENTENCE They would (prey) to god and hope that they would be as good as Maurice Richard.
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