Thursday, September 11, 2008

the medicine bag

the medicine bag is a story about two kids who always said great stuff and there grandpa. How their grandpa would have a armord shell and they say great stuff about their village isn't as great as they like to belive so. i think that story was alright but I would never in my life read it again!I can not relate to anything in this story and i hated everything about it.




(the) (medicien bag) is a story about two kids who always said great stuff and (there - USE THE POSSESSIVE THEIR) grandpa. How (there) grandpa would have a (armord) shell and they say great stuff about their village isn't as great as they like to belive (so). (i) think that story was alright but (i) would never in my life read it again! (WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE STORY? CAN YOU RELATE SOMEHOW TO THE IDEAS OF TRADITION PRESENTED IN THE STORY?)

CHECK YOUR SPELLING FOR 'The Medicine Bag'.

2 comments:

tofu_ladz said...

<33 hey noobly

Mr. Chow said...

(the) (medicien bag) is a story about two kids who always said great stuff and (there - USE THE POSSESSIVE THEIR) grandpa. How (there) grandpa would have a (armord) shell and they say great stuff about their village isn't as great as they like to belive (so). (i) think that story was alright but (i) would never in my life read it again! (WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE STORY? CAN YOU RELATE SOMEHOW TO THE IDEAS OF TRADITION PRESENTED IN THE STORY?)

CHECK YOUR SPELLING FOR 'The Medicine Bag'.