that story was very boring.i think it had absolutley no porpose of life. why on earth would somone write that?it was just about some person skating then not winning and some dad crying at the end.wow story of my life man if you were gunna write a story at least make it interesting seriously what is this world coming to?okay so what if it was about canada not winning you still dont have to be a stupid ballbaby.
1a.he didnt give up.
1b.because he tried
1c.the fact that he didnt give up
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(that) story was very boring. (i) think it had absolutley no (porpose) (of) life. (HAVEN'T YOU EVER THOUGHT THAT WHEN YOU DID YOU BEST, IT DIDN'T MATTER HOW YOUR ENDED UP?) (w)hy on earth would somone write that? (i)t was just about some person skating then not winning and some dad crying at the end. (w)ow, story of my life man(.) WHAT DO YOU MEAN? (i)f you were (gunna) write a story(,) at least make it interesting(.) (seriously) what is this world coming to? (O)kay, so what if it was about (c)anada not winning? (you) still don(')t have to be a stupid ballbaby. I'M NOT SURE WHAT THAT LAST PART MEANS. IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THE READING, HOW WOULD YOU REWRITE IT?
1a. (h)e didn(')t give up.
1b. because he tried
1c. the fact that he didnt give up
PLEASE USE COMPLETE SENTENCES SO THE READER UNDERSTANDS THE QUESTIONS.
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